The value of people - fifty word stories

[saoirseronan]

4 years sitting in the same class.
4 years trying to get his attention.
I felt invisible, not even a smile.

Does he know that I exist?
Should I exist?
What’s the point?

Lying in the bath looking at the blade.
All it would have taken was a simple wave.

Comments

[gretum]

Sad

[mike.boatright]

wow, beautiful.

[saoirseronan]

Thanks for that.

[vaitelavicius]

I really like this one.

Well written.

[saoirseronan]

Thanks. That means a lot.

[charlesmackenzie]

What a tremendous, captivating little bit of something you got there. Upvoted & followed
@originalworks

[saoirseronan]

Thank you. Thats brilliant feedback and i really appreciate it.

[spalatino]

Dark 50 word story. I enjoyed the finality in such a short format

[saoirseronan]

Sometimes a bit of darkness is needed. That's the way life is.

[spalatino]

I completely agree

[crookshanks]

Damn. Someone has no chill. Thats just in 50 words aswell. Top quality work.

[saoirseronan]

Thats why i love the format. You really need to think about how you phrase every word.

[brandt]

This is really well written and powerful to read. Nice work!

[saoirseronan]

Thanks. Wasnt really paying attention when i wrote it bit when i read it back it really hit me. Love this piece.

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[jayna]

A very intense little story that reads like a poem! Wow. Nicely done.