A Plot Hatched In Fiftywords for @jayna’s challenge

[thatlovechild]

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‘Quick! Guys! Act cool!’

A flashlight came into vision.
‘Hey officer..how’s duty?’
Three young men..nothing out of place..but they were too cheerful.

Something was off.

‘License and registration’. No problem there.
‘Car search please’. Their faces fell.

Something was in the back.
And it had stopped breathing.

Comments

[dante31]

This is creative

a dead game
The huning party was heading home to celebrate

[thatlovechild]

Thank you! I love your little addition..it can be the prelude to a sequel? Prequel?

[jayna]

Oh my gosh! That last line!

Really well done, @thatlovechild. You are on a roll with these stories!

[thatlovechild]

Thanks @jayna for all the prompts and inspiration. You’re awesome :)

[jayna]

Thank you, @thatlovechild. It has been a really fun way to get to know other Steemians while encouraging creativity.

[anikekirsten]

Wow. This gave me shivers. I was expecting weed or something illegal, not a dead body. Nicely done!

[thatlovechild]

Thank you! :)

[ravencorinn]

I have chills. That ending was perfect, and in only 50 words.

[thatlovechild]

Thanks so much for appreciating it.. #Fiftywords is hard work!

[creatr]

Wow, you've captured a common scene with an incredible twist...

Nicely done!

😄😇😄

[thatlovechild]

Thanks @creatr! :) Love the username..wish I thought of it first. Dang.