Reading the comments on the winner posts has helped me formulate better words and gain a better understand of what a quality haiku looks like. So, I thank you and your team.
The picture alone had my brain working for days until I sat down to write it.
I say that you're on the right track.. keep checking the examples of haiku that Marco inserts in his posts or read true Haiku poetry (Matsuo Basho, Kobayashi Issa..) 👍