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Your tutor is right it is quite a good representation of schizophrenia. However I would say from observing my sister and some of the people in her groups that voice are often a lot more insidious than this. It a horrific illness and sadly the side effects of the medications don't make it any easier.

Absolutely! I used to be a support worker for people suffering with mental health problems, and many of them were schizophrenic. It comes in many forms, all of which torment the individual, and of course their families. As you know too well. Thank you for your comment!

This is really good, i loved it. Keep up the good work! Good luck :D

Thank you @middleme, I appreciate your comment.

I recommend reading RAW Food and the Psych Ward and Ready Set Go! Steo out. I think it will speak to you