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RE: Finish the story: The Story of Mr Renhe Ren

in #finishthestory6 years ago

Terrific story, Felt.Buzz! Your graphic representations of the hatred, jealouies, et al. that consumed him to distraction gives us a strikingly powerful lesson. There aren't any do overs and the truest horror is wasting one's life.

he felt them crawl all over him before jumping off his back and coming together into the form of the walking corpse.

You gave me legitimate shivers with this image! 😎