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RE: The story of Mr. Renhe Ren

in #finishthestory6 years ago

Terrific take from the prompt! Ren's waiting in silence brings about the corpse of his enemy, whose misdeeds have caught up to him. He's given a measure of vindication for all of his warnings, previously snubbed, from those who finally were able to see the guy for who he was. I liked how you wrote Ren contemplating what he's been told in the end.

Congratulations on receiving a well deserved Curie vote, Tristan!!