Welcome to the contest, Wakeupkitty!! We're happy to have you dive in and play with us!
Thanks for the powerful ending and lesson in the folly of wasting one's life with bitterness and envy. This is driven home well with your show of the perspectives of his family members. His desire to see his enemy dead costs him the love and respect of those who should have mattered the most to him. With no one left to care for him, Ren proves to be his own worst enemy, as the obsession ultimately costs him his life.
A great first entry!
I thank you for given me the opportunity to join. I think if it comes to it we are our own enemy in most cases and it makes us blind for what we have.
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