Oh gosh, you really are the master of emotive endings, the upset, and the betrayal here really comes across in Flynn, you carry the feelings from the first half, giving them grounding and depth. This is a very strong ending. Father Thoram was right, Flynn should be anger with him, he denied Flynn the chance to prayer for his mother's forgiveness. This leaves me really feeling like i hope he is okay, very well written.
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