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RE: Finish The Story Contest - Week #57!

in #finishthestory5 years ago

I love how you came out with such a similar set of questions in here, Shiro's apathy, given this is from childhood, is perfect, his character feels so fitting, your talent is always an amazing way to lead the pack. Him ripping off his shirt, and then it being Australia! For some reason that felt like a really fitting twist. Then ending on the psychiatrist note, gives the whole thing a great tone, this is why you are the best ;)

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