my only issue was the gender pronoun for the captain. in the original the captain is a woman, but in your story it's a man.
beside that, this was a cool ending. the moral dilemma of being a turncloak vs dying with the ship. the price paid was just. good ending.
Yes! It was my mistake. You see, I didn't get that 'Madame' when I was reading and then went with the statistical: a male pirate u_u Will read more carefully next time!
Ah, the price is always just... Life is good at economics, right?
Thanks for reading! : )