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RE: Metallic Kisses - Finish The Story Contest, Week #29

Thanks @bananafish! :D I was definitely going for some of each! There were so many directions I wanted to take this in, It was hard to pick one.

I do wish I'd been able to carry on more of the poetic language and flair and tone from the original prompt. That was something I really dug about @marcoriccardi's ending. Switching up my writing style is something I need to get better at.