An immersive walk in Yerevan with an unexpected ending. I found the accuracy of your descriptions truly pleasant. Try to pay attention to the present tense/past perfect during the narration. Compliments for making us reflect on a tragedy of contemporary history starting from a fable context.
I'm glad I was able to give some life to my ending.
Thanks for the tense reminders. I miss them when I think I haven't.
Thanks for reading.
I went back and found some of my errors. If I missed what you're talking about, please, point it out - if you have time.