They both shared an expression of awe as the golden light filled their vision.
What is this golden light from the mysterious briefcase? and why is everyone after it?
This is a real twist of an ending, the child not being a child and the Yellow Sign that made Shannon physically react, what would he have told her had he had more time I wonder?
“Relax toots.
This nickname really speaks about the relationship between Moa Tikarr and Shannon.
The only thing to watch out for is in this sentence, it doesn't quite read right with 'someplace else fast', this could just be me though?
The man looked annoyed, as if he needed to get someplace else fast while not trying to be rude.
Thanks for the feedback. Not the best sentence. Can get tripped up reading it for sure.