A creepy loop, like a recurring nightmare!
Only, I don't get why the narration is sometimes in first person: for most part of the story, you write "he sees" "he feels", but sometimes it's like Ben is talking in first person, "was making me salivate" "I turn to the villagers"...
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Oh yeah I sometimes have that difficulty and I change the narrative person. I have fixed that and made it all third person for consistency!
thank you for pointing that out!