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RE: 16 days of literature: Particle Ghost

in #finishthestory6 years ago

I thoroughly enjoyed the switching of genre form for the FtS entry. Your conclusion, in keeping with the plot of the prompt, feels meditative. This man spent so much energy dwelling on external factors and then finally internal, only to find himself at the root of it all. We never really get over ourselves, do we?

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UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments! I certainly was aiming and been glad that people have been picking up on the meditative qualities. Also good on spotting the Dialectical essence in the FTS entry as well; narcissus is a fun element to play on~

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