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RE: Pointy Eyes Shine In The Dark (Finish The Story #52 Entry)

in #finishthestory6 years ago (edited)

Addenum: your post structured it as a poem, but right after you stated it was a song so I wanted to poke at the fact that it behaved like a poem :p

Edit: @calluna - Ah, gotcha but we still have to deal with that giant elephant of the Tres Culos as it chokes us both. And how did you know I would do such a fun [and bloody and probably horrific] ending? :p But I especially loved the jester line, reminds me of some Jevil and me in general but I dunno.

And they do need a puppeteer to keep them co-hosts in check!~ And I do need a poem expo, want to help me with that one?

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Yeah maybe should have put them all as one line, oh well, lazy :p glad it works reading more like a poem though <3

Hmm I suppose it should address the canon when we all know it's kinda intended as a tie in, oh well :p now I wonder what gave me a hint :p haha awww yey I was hoping it kinda would <3

Now that would have been a much better solution for auntie masha haha. Of course, we just need some more entries this round to inspire you <3

~Mwah!~ :*3

Oh well is the correct answer here :p I :p really, :p really :p do :p wonder :p now :p mój :p Ukochany!~ :p And yay! Glad that it worked out <3

Well, we shall see what we shall see <3