UwU ~ Thanks for reading and thanks for the compliments!~ Will await yer comments on the other parts of the posts, but I see yah payed attention and noticed what I stressed on.
You are viewing a single comment's thread from:
RE: 16 days of literature: Particle Ghost
Haiku throughout with the Finish the Story even. Well done.
Only could you weave together a dream like version using the spirit of the Japanese form in every stanza?
Hey! It was very convenient and I didn't felt like writing in a contemporary format while still keeping the style I've been toying with. Anywho, wanted to play off the Japanese-styled setting while suggesting that he or a friend of his wrote a poem (with the format of haikus) on the matter. And so started off a fun evening of writing haiku stanzas that linked with each other, having fun not only with a 5-7-5 format but hitting (successfully) the 500-word limit. I honestly had to add necessary fluff as I noticed I finally reached where I wanted to be. But what you see here, except at the very end, was completely first-draft and out-n-published as soon as I hit the 500-word limit. (I probably should mention in congruence to combining the haiku format with my style while abiding to a 500-word limit, I wanted to keep going the dialectical theme in the prompt of which I emphasized that through my style and the vast breath the haiku format has for both Metaphysical and Dialectical poetry.)
That's awesome. For this round going to borrow this idea as I think your right that it adds to the setting of the story.
:D :D!!!!~