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RE: Finish the Story Contest - WEEK #32!

in #finishthestory • 6 years ago

A little over the word count but I trimmed as much as I think I could without losing the idea I had in mind.

I had a good time writing this one.

https://steemit.com/finishthestory/@tristancarax/awakenings

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     6 years ago  

    Did you eliminate all the adverbs? 😉

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       6 years ago  

      haha. No

      But, I don't write many of them so I would have gotten rid of about five words. 8-)

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