I love the aura of reminiscence you weaved through this! It felt glazed with fondness, all culminating in older John and Carl preparing to spend a summer with later generations. You certainly embraced the positivity challenge, it’s good to have a happy ending sometimes. Also, John’s anxiety about the ride and trying not to seem worried was so relatable! You described it really well, and good thing he had Carl next to him 😊
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Awww i am so glad you liked it, and that you picked up on the later generations, I hoped playing it subtle may carry better, but then knew not saying more was a risk. I tried, for you guys ;) hmmm... I normally avoid typical these sort of happy endings where I can, they don't make me happy for sure, so to write one was an experience lol. I do love a bit of trepidation, and it's amazing what we can do with the right person by our side - talking of which, you guys make an awesome team <3