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RE: Disguised at the border - a fifty words story

in #fitywords7 years ago

Wow! I envy your ability to tell such a gripping story in so few words!

She thought she tasted freedom.
It was blood.
Her own blood.

Your ending was so powerful and dark. To have been so close...

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Ah thanks a million @brisby, you're as good :o) Forgive me really really late reply... Lost password while on hols and still catching up since I got home... :o)