Matatu's chest inflated a bit, he balled his fists started quickly striding towards Pete.
Matatu's chest inflated a bit, he balled his fists , and started quickly striding towards Pete.
In your corner Matatu, Until I give the sign! And Gottschalk, stop that shit right now!
Two possible ways to correct it:
- "In your corner, Matatu, until I give the sign! And Gottschalk, stop that shit right now!"
- "In your corner, Matatu! Until I give the sign! And Gottschalk, stop that shit right now!"
Finally, I must point out (as usual) the utter lack of quotation marks around spoken parts throughout the text.