You do a beauty job of tying this up, a very good example of a one paragraph story! By keeping it short, the words hold a greater power, I have seen a few with the idea of blindness from this picture, but this is definitely my favourite! There is a simplicity that adds a greater depth to the story, and perfectly compliments the picture - good luck!
Wow thank you! nwn It is very gratifying to receive such a genuine opinion and with so much value uwu. I'm very happy that you like it, I wrote it on a day full of inspiration. My friends usually tell me that I write only sad stories, however, I think that as in life things aren't always black and white, but sometimes there is gray and that gray gives meaning to life, it's like a bittersweet feeling. I'm glad you managed to appreciate it <3