I guess you have to pay attention on your grammar and the use of words or the structure of your sentences. You have to capitalize the first letter of the first word in every sentence always. Use capital letter 'I' always not small 'i' when you're referring to yourself. You can read more posts on trending or hot topic and learn from their posts.
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