First off: Welcome to Steemit!
You make a number of REALLY good points in your article and many of them I agree on. However, I think we have some differences of opinion as far as implementation. Free market always results in accumulation of power towards those who are the fastest at gaming the system. It can easily devolve into a brutal, 'might is right' scenario.
At the same time I do like that power is decentralizing, and agree that this is a positive trend in societies around the world.
I took the liberty of sharing your post in Steemit Chat (found in the upper right hand menu) within the proper post-promotion channels. As a newbie, you might want to check out this article and this one.
Also, check out #Steemprentice in Steemit Chat for any questions :). Great post, Upvoted and Followed, and glad to have you!
Thank you very much for your feedback and tips for Steemit! I am just figuring things out and thought it'd be worth a shot to post something and see what happens. I will certainly check those articles out.
Of course! We're always looking for eloquent, interesting authors here on Steemit to add value to the platform. Pretty sure you're one of 'em :D.
Be sure to look at the posts in #introducemyself and do a post that is like them with a picture of yourself and a note with the date and the word "Steemit" written on it. Voters that add more value tend to only go for people who are verified in this way (though you certainly don't have to and there are always exceptions). Will definitely help your odds here, though.
Again, don't be afraid to ask questions. This platform is still in early stages and may aspects of it can be a tad intimidating for the uninitiated.