I'd say you got the gist of it down. The truth is that anyway you slice a political system history shows mind control (mind control meaning government) is corrupt. Whether it is decentralized or centralized they have all gone down the road of murder, theft, and liars.
If I was you I would start using sources in you writing. It is stupid, but the people have been conditioned to recognize credibility in a certain format or way. Google Scholar is a great source for studies. Alternative news services are writing articles about this subject. Even the testimony of your friends and family can help your writing gain credibility.
Your use of photo's in your writing is awesome and enhances your writing very nicely. Upvoted, and resteem.
Thank you great insight. Feedback is so important if one is to improve.
And really appreciate the reesteem
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