DetectiveM on the Case: THE MISSING EMOJI STORY (Chapters 1 and 2)

in #freewriters4 years ago (edited)

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Ch.1 Caution!!! MAD Scientist At Work

MUAHAHAHA!!! I WILL BE NOW KNOWN AS A FAMOSE SCIENTIST OF EMOJIS AND WILL BE THE BEST HERO OF CRAZEN TOWN!
As scientist Smits day dreams of become Crazen towns best hero he accidently pours to much of one of his potions.
BOOM!! Explodes the potion. Well that went great he says as ashes of his burnt hair fall to the burnt black floor.

Ch.2 The Detect Team is on the case.

Any new thing? Asked Detective M. Not realy, all Im getting is Those classic prank calls from those punks on Kray Kray St. replies Detective J.
Great now we can eat chips and watch dora! Spy T exitedly says as she jumps on to the counch, already with chips, snuggling with her stuffy and with the Tv-controler by her side. Also humming the entry song of dora. No T we have more adventures ahead of us, not watching a silly Spanish cartoon, of Dooza you say? Says M sarcastically. Who would even name a character that? Adds J still focused on finding a mission for the Detect team.

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YES! I GOT SOMETHING! Oh. Its another one from. Mr. smarty smity pants. J says as a nick name for the crazy scientist smits. Haha. Smarty Smity Pants. giggles T. Ok. Continue s J.
According to his buzzer feed on #Hive. He says he hired a helper so he could be the bestest hero in Crazen town and the helper as his side kick?
That guys a wierdo, interrupts M.
Im going to research on him. Says J.
5 minuets later. Looks like we got a background check on him already! Since detective M is curious she looks over detective J's shoulder.
 

 

🔎 What could be so interesting?
🔎 Would things take a turn?
🔎 you never know what could happen next... So stay tuned!

-DetectiveM
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He he very nice. I like so much the art of the mad scientist.

Good work and please continue with your writings about the Detective M and J. :)

Regards.

Thank you! Ch.3 and 4 will be coming out to day or tomorrow. Hoping that you will like it!

Very cool! Make sure to have them spell check their work, but very good overall!

Thank you! And I will take your advise, enhance it and make it stronger. Thank you for you feed back it realy helped.

You're welcome! I know it sounds cheesy, but the little things matter more than most people realize.

Haha, this is awesome. I love the Detective M illustration :)

Thank you!

That's a nice story, I really like so much! Greets!!

Thank you!

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