I really liked your imagination means, you used the subject as rain and you expanded like an story and that needs imagination because sometimes people put lot of efforts to come up with uniqueness but in my opinion the uniqueness is not about the length it's about the impact and outcome, and i really liked this interesting post.
Literally that second picture is so heavy and it's reflecting as about rain and that also heavy rain, and most of the time when we see these type of weather most of us prefer to stay at home and tend to eat some hot snacks with tea or coffee to enjoy the season.
So, keep up this work. Wishing you an great day and stay blessed. 🙂