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Two quick tips to improve your gaming content in the future:
- Plan out your article before you start writing. Think about what you want to say, structure this argument and write it out.
- Make it flow. Think about how you can connect all the parts of the article in a natural way. This makes it more enjoyable to read. You're a bit all over the place at the moment.
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