Welcome to Echoes, a compilation of Poems. This one goes by the name, Life Becomes You. I as an author, had certain thoughts running while penning it down. However you (readers) can interpret it in your own way.
Figure of Speech - Personification
Mood - Romantic
Tone - Cheerful
Form - Free Verse, as it does not follow any set pattern
Life Becomes You
photo credit: policystreet
It wasn’t this beautiful
Until, Beautiful became You.
It wasn’t this Happy
Until, Happiness became You.
It wasn’t this Lost
Until, Lost became You.
It wasn’t this Crazy
Until, Craziness became You.
It wasn’t this Complete
Until, being with You made it Whole.
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This is an interesting direction when You is a subjective manner of who.
It can pretty nice of a poem used during proposals lol.
Nicely done @cherrythinks !
Keep it up! There could be a few more places you can think of participating such as 5-minute freewrites that can challenge your brain to blurt out whatever you think based on the topic of the day.