Haiku #4: Old Tree

in #haiku7 years ago

Growing old; a part of life. Everything around us will grow old someday - no exemption. Many are terrified of the thoughts of growing old and dying. I, myself am not to keen to being wrinkly and getting weaker. Unfortunately, this is a part of our lives we cannot escape. The haiku below is a metaphor to growing old, so I suggest not to take it at face value.

Despite only being three sentences, it has a lot of hidden meaning within, so I suggest reading it a few times. Anyways, I hope you will enjoy reading it.


cloudy-2706978_1280.jpg


Leaves being stepped on, broken

Gust of wind carrying the debris, scattered

Old tree no longer green


20180427_002425-BlendCollage.jpg


A Haiku is a Japanese poem which can also be known as a Hokku. A Haiku poem is similar to a Tanka but has fewer lines. A Haiku is a type of poetry that can be written on many themes, from love to nature.


CCO Creative Commons Imagery by Pixabay


If this post is older than 7 days, please support by upvoting my latest post upvotelatest post view latest post


Footer_-riovanes.png

Sort:  

I really like the various works of poetry and photos let me Resteem your best poems and photos.

I know about haiku,

American poets such as Jack Kerouac have acknowledged that the American pronunciation is completely different from Japanese pronunciation. They wrote haiku by denying 17 parties and three sentences.

Kobayashi Ishara Haiku: Firefighter flies / drops so fast / silent
Matsu Basu's haiku: butterfly ointment / aroma of your wing / orchid
Haosu of Josia Busan: A clash of ax / pineapple smell / winter banana.

Nowadays, haiku can be written without following the 17 syllables and 3 sentences of the traditional haiku, it's called freestyle haiku. Personally though, I prefer the traditional haiku. Thanks for visiting.

sneaky-ninja-sword-xs.jpg

Sneaky Ninja Attack! You have just been defended with a 5.27% upvote!
I was summoned by @riovanes. I have done their bidding and now I will vanish...


woosh

A portion of the proceeds from your bid was used in support of youarehope and tarc.


Abuse Policy
Rules
How to use Sneaky Ninja
How it works
Victim of grumpycat?

i like it!!!

Your Post Has Been Featured on @Resteemable!
Feature any Steemit post using resteemit.com!
How It Works:
1. Take Any Steemit URL
2. Erase https://
3. Type re
Get Featured Instantly & Featured Posts are voted every 2.4hrs
Join the Curation Team Here | Vote Resteemable for Witness