You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: My Entry: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #51View the full contextbananafish (62)in #haikucontest • 4 years ago I think you caught an aspect that I wanted to stand out from the photo!
Thank you, @bananafish!!! Was it the 'layers'? ;)
Yes, it was, like three strips of different elements: earth, water and air; all warmed by the sun (fire)
Ahh, yes.. Great observation, @bananafish!
I was referring to the three visual layers in the photo, but I really like the idea of the four elements! Perhaps 'fire' could be included in this way:
Hot day at the beach,
layer on top of layer;
sand, water, and sky