The picture of this week to do the Haiku has been complicated but you have made it exceptional. You have mixed time (past and present) with natural and religious elements, but not with the hardness of the stone but with its immortality, with the symbolism of its eternity. I loved it. Congratulations @calluna
The picture of this week to do the Haiku has been complicated but you have made it exceptional. You have mixed time (past and present) with natural and religious elements, but not with the hardness of the stone but with its immortality, with the symbolism of its eternity. I loved it. Congratulations @calluna
Your haiku is strong and powerful. You express so much with so little words
I love this
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Nice haiku! The reader can feel both immortality and impermanence, and the wabi sabi feeling for worn and old things