You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #5View the full contextgaby-crb (59)in #haikucontest • 6 years ago Swing. Swinging hammock House above for tiny feet Screaming, laughing, play
I like the way you suggest a lullaby or a nursery rhyme! Almost onomatopoeic, I love it! Onomatopoeia in haiku is frequently used ;)
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Great description of the moment! You made me think of a peaceful moment, just relaxing in the hammock while my little monkeys have themselves a ball!