You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku Contest - WEEK #5View the full contextmanoldonchev (73)in #haikucontest • 6 years ago Sun still casting shades The tree has grown a little Childhood long past gone
Thank you for your participation! Poignant notalgia in this beautiful haiku :)
I like the suggestion of growth and change, while some things stay the same: The sun still casting shadows. We move on...and leave behind signs. But life goes on.
Este ejercicio me gustó mucho. Presenta una visión de la naturaleza tocada por una conciencia que percibe la permanencia y la variación en la vida.
Lovely! I enjoyed your comparison of what time has done for the tree vs the child.