Mizu No Oto contestImage by @calluna for the
Gripping shades -
branches extending
to reach out
Unlit path
that calmly exists
- life begone
Peering sight -
light closes in now
on darkness
Winteric -
greenery rising
beyond snow
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RE: Mizu No Oto - Every Image Has Its Haiku - Edition #25 (English)
Glad I was able to help yah create your first four (rule of fours on the internet here! :p) haikus and the html!!!!~
My first haiku ever! Thanks for expanding my horizons with contest.
https://steemit.com/haikucontest/@sevendust04/my-entry-mizu-no-oto-every-image-has-its-haiku-edition-25
Ohhh these are so good! and you capture so many of the elements in here; the passage of time, season, the wonder and simplicity, these are just beautifully done, they all have this sense of stillness and reflection that seems so very fitting <3
As for @theironfelix, you put me in great indecision. What haiku should I consider for the contest? Multiple entries are difficult to manage, I don't want someone think they can easily increase their possibilities submitting more than one haiku.
I think I will choose the first one, it's the one I feel more close to the haiku language!
Your haiku seguidilla has very good images. But I particularly like this strophe because of the synaesthesia: