Trees and dirt confirm
Our path, narrow and forward
Our home, far behind
Dropping the haiku here now, before tucking in for bed. A down payment on further comment.
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I love that!
Very nice, I feel the sense of adventure and travel
Cool Cheers!
By using the verb confirm, you poetically invert what we usually do: it's not nature turned into a metaphor for life, but life turned into a metaphor that trees confirm.
Very good!
A hug!I really liked this haiku, @vdux.
Thank you!