Friend, I am new doing haiku. But, in the research I did, it says that it is divided into three lines and yours presents a single line. Sorry if I'm daring, but are you sure that's the case? If you are sure, explain to me to learn a little more and if you need to correct, let me know and delete this message. It is a constructive criticism with the hope that we improve together, supporting each other.
It would be something like this. The count of the syllables, traditionally is 5/7/5. In my publication I made an introduction where I talk about what I researched about haiku. I am also participating. You must read each one's post and comment and vote inside and outside.
(That already answered)All right! I see that you understood me You separated the poem into three lines. Now you must go read the poems of the other participants and vote and comment, that is a rule.
The sunflowers open their petals so that the sun caresses them slowly.
Friend, I am new doing haiku. But, in the research I did, it says that it is divided into three lines and yours presents a single line. Sorry if I'm daring, but are you sure that's the case? If you are sure, explain to me to learn a little more and if you need to correct, let me know and delete this message. It is a constructive criticism with the hope that we improve together, supporting each other.
I think I need to lean more and how to put it. I don't really know how to do that
Please how can I divide into three line I have tried my best and I have no one to assist me. I will be glad if you can help thanks
Ok. Lo voy a intentar.
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It would be something like this. The count of the syllables, traditionally is 5/7/5. In my publication I made an introduction where I talk about what I researched about haiku. I am also participating. You must read each one's post and comment and vote inside and outside.
What's the 5/7/5 all about?
I mean what does it mean?
(That already answered)All right! I see that you understood me You separated the poem into three lines. Now you must go read the poems of the other participants and vote and comment, that is a rule.
Wow thanks, you really a good friend I will always check your blog two times a day
Nice work. LS:)
Thanks dear @prydepoltz
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I love sunflower art...
It's mood enhancing.
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hello there @luckyspark! cheers to you and such bright and warm haiku =D love your photo as well. Good vibes galore!!!