It’s a New Mexico high plains breeze. I’m a tumbleweed, rolling slow along an empty stretch of highway, looking for or maybe, remembering a home. Wow.This is spectacular, @jonknight. There are so many wonderful, quotable gems.
It's a very touching tale, too. You've done an amazing job of putting us readers into this little future world, where so much damage has been done, but the memories of the past linger. The poignant VR communication really works. Just... wow. (And I love your curse word!)
Thank you @jayna! As always, the workshop helps immensely. I loved writing this, and rewriting and rewriting, lol. But I did love it, and it makes me happy to see it reach you and others, too.