not trying to troll/be mean, but just wondering: what's going on with your first two sentences? the first one is a fragment and i don't know what to say about the second one. i had to stop because it's too frustrating to read. i don't know if there's some software involved screwing up your sentences or you're not a native english speaker or maybe some other issue, but i've noticed it in some of your other stories too. sometimes it makes me think the writer is not the person in the profile picture and this is all a ploy/psyop, but maybe that's just me. :)
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Correct on the second. English is my second language but I do endeavor to get better and hopefully this writing helps.....at least I hope it does. As with practice, perhaps this too will improve. I never found learning languages easy despite coming from a multi-ethnic background. I do not know how some people do it. perhaps an innate talent, I for one miss;) Btw, I love psyop studies. I took a course in information operations recently and the works of Le Bon to Cialdini as well as my fav, Bernays was covered. The Military perspective is interesting...especially some of the work of Aquino.
oh, in that case you're doing just fine. keep it up. what is your native language?