I rate your post below with the following ratings on a scale of 1 to 10:
Presentation: 9.5/10 - Great work, some small room for improvement but nothing major.
Content: 9.7/10 - I loved it and not much you could improve on from my personal opinion you really captured it well.
Effort: 9.3/10 - You seem to really love putting effort into your work and I don't think it is just me who noticed it :)
Uniqueness: 9.1/10 - I haven't seen many posts similar to this during my time of lurking through steemit.
Love it fellow steemian!
❤ from ezpz
Thank you for your kind comments.
Have you followed the trail of miss deeds?
Having missed a lot of chances to listen to my father and grandfather I am using this to try and tell some small parts of family history.
Besides if I get in first with the story who is going to say I was wrong?
My son trevor.george has a read before I post so it isn't too much dribble, has learned things as well.