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RE: Feathered Friends Comment Contest-Round 13

in Feathered Friends4 years ago (edited)

There once was a bird whose reputation was known through out the world for his stunning beauty. He would go to and fro for all to see him and admire him, this gorgeous bird was only beautiful on the outside for he was mean to all who came to see him. He would make others feel bad about themselves by his mean little chirps, they could never measure up to his beauty.

Now one day a very special bird showed up at his appearance, she wasn't beautiful or even anything look at really. But there was something so wonderful about her that all the birds who came to admire his beauty were all chirping about her. He was so upset by this he just flew off with out one bad chirp about anyone. When he landed again at his next appearance, all the birds gathered around him to give their love and acclimations to him. Out of no where there she was that most wonderful special bird, all the other birds began admiring her. This made him so angry he let out the ugliest meanest chirp ever!

As he was spewing out this hate, the special and wonderful bird waved her wing and spoke so softly that only he could hear. She spoke love into his heart and peace to him, she gave him humility for pride. He learned that day that beauty comes from the soul not from looks. He bowed to her greatness as she turned into a statue for all to remember that day.

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A powerful lesson learned! Thanks for writing a comment story!
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She spoke love into his heart and peace to him, she gave him humility for pride. He learned that day that beauty comes from the soul not from looks

Well said and you know I teach my kids that aswell

Thank you!

Love the message in your story. Great one!

thank you!

Wow, that's such a lovely story!

Nice one there @pinkdragonfly 😀

A beautiful story with a lovely message.

Thank you

@pinkdragonfly An interesting view here and a great way to end the story.
Well done!

@papilloncharity thank you very much.

Only a pleasure!