I feel like this is the bare-bones beginning. Now describe her. Where did you meet? What was the friendship based on? How long was she special?
And why did it end?
Imagine there are no images and tell me everything with words. EG... What did the light shining from the window do to the colour of her eyes?
So you have made a beginning. 😊 Well done.
It started like a normal friendship.
There is lot to talk about it. Needs more than 1500 words.
when I post that, I will send that to you first.
Her eyes were brown 😊