“In Life's Frivolities” You gave it a lovely Title — niceee
“silently sitting in solitude”
Love the repetition of the same consonant sound.
But these are my favourite lines:
“like a goose
paddling stagnant waters
and watching the lulling sunset?
scampering in idleness”
I love the images painted, they appeal to my senses the most, especially the word “lulling” added additional effect to the lines...
Good job brother @josediccus
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Thanks a lot man, it was a beautiful piece I had like a really great time writing it.
Oh, good to hear that. Hope to see more of it next time.
Stay blessed brother @josediccus