The way you changed the outlook of the images is out of these world totally. I have always struggled with writing a nature poem because descriptive imagery has always been a challenge but then this is beautiful, the description is beautiful
The light of clinging March extends
to fondle all the drooping stems
between the brush, around the bends
of springtime soon to pass.
This verse is beautiful although I haven't really experienced the weathers that are portrayed there, it felt so beautiful to be able to imagine it outwardly. Well written my friend. @dpend