Hello @nuella01. Thanks for publishing your post in the Ladies of Hive Community.
Wow. What a strange dream. I too used to dream of monsters chasing me when I was a child. Run as fast as I could, I'd never outrun them. My feet were stuck in mud. My heart would race. It was a true nightmare for me. So I understand.
I was wondering whether you wouldn't mind me pointing out a few items in your post that I feel would make your content a much stronger quality and better read for those visiting.
Why not think about adding a space between your paragraphs. It will break up the ideas and start fresh with a new thought. Spacing such as this makes for a better structure?
In a sentence, the word "i" should be capitalized just as you would do at the beginning of a sentence.
Several of your sentences need a period (.) at the end of it before starting a new thought. Also, other punctuation could be added to add clarity to your story.
If you'd care to take a look, to help with your sentence structure, there is a free online program called "GRAMMARLY". https://www.grammarly.com/
Thanks for sharing your story. Have a good weekend.
Thanks for reading, sometimes we do have weird dreams.
I'll take your advice, thanks.