autumn birch willow
a winter wizened eye weeps
cries golden teardrops
abbreviated version
autumn willow
a wintered eye
gold tears fall
Some argue that 5 7 5 is too long for English #haiku. Feel free to offer your own edit in the comments. #nature #poetry #photography
gilded birch willow
winters eye blinks
Chrysus weeps
Idk just playing
Love the use of gilded and I learn a new thing ... Chrysus ... the god of gold. VERY NICE.
Your haiku packs a punch:)
I did top! I was looking online for gold related words and stumbled across that - don't you love a new discovery?
Glad you enjoyed it. Love games like this!
black willow
with her wizened eye
weeping gold
Good spark for engagement!
Nice ... that is really pretty. I like how you personified the willow as a woman.
I was thinking of 'widow', as perhaps you were, playing with the similarity of sound between 'willow' and 'widow'. ... Been a few years since we interacted on the blockchain; good to 'see' you!
I did not see that ... the widow and willow connection. I saw the tree eye as an old man. Yes, it is very good to interact again:)
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Pretty emojis:)