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RE: Life Lessons - Part 1

in Ecency2 years ago

That closing Yet I think is quite foreshadowing.. or is that foreboding... I don't know the words :P I liked how Marco's name fits with the mothers outfit, it completes her description so well. Looking forward to the next part and all the in between stories. Welcome to Hive. !PIZZA !LUV

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I'm glad you enjoyed the ending...with the foreshadowing...and maybe some foreboding as well :) Thanks for the warm welcome.