Transformation worked well 😊I like the shirt style.
I had similar experience recently. A dress I was sewing was too wide. It looked nice with linen on a book but it wasn't with jersey. Mine looked totally like a pajama 😂 So I made it slimmer. Still it looks like a pajama in a way but wearable with a belt or a cardigan ...
"It's supposed to look like that - all the fashionable women in Tokio wear such a dress!"