As always, I wish I could read your work in Spanish. This is a great scene with a lot of alluded to but unstated things that build tension and interest in the reader.
I really love the last line, They said goodbye at the wrong time, like ghosts.
As always, I wish I could read your work in Spanish. This is a great scene with a lot of alluded to but unstated things that build tension and interest in the reader.
I really love the last line, They said goodbye at the wrong time, like ghosts.
Yes, the foreign language is like a glass wall: you can see what the other side is about, but you can't get in. Thanks so much for the comment! I'm glad you liked it!
Very well said.
Mine too!
And oh... you found them :)