The struggles at first became fruitless as sensation took over your whole body. I believe at that moment, you did not care if the students were watching through the flashes of the lightening, or if there was a section that has been abandoned. I like how well you described the scenes giving the readers more things to imagine
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La protagonista del relato se entregó al retozo de las sensaciones y olvidó por completo su trabajo. La lujuria y el deseo imperaron dejando a un lado el raciocinio. Gracias por tus valiosas palabras. Fue un gusto leerte y saludarte.